Here is my improving comments drawing.I had to copy someones comment and copy it on this drawing then I had to write a pretend comment in the drawing then when I finish I publish it on the blog that I have been on.

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Here is a padlet that room 8 has made.It is about what makes  a good blog comment and it is good to have a conversation. The important thing is that you put a capital letter at the start and add punctuation at the end of a sentence.  

Welcome this a thinglink about energy and power i had a little play with the school energy toys and you should check out the thinglink now 

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Hello here is my before and after post check it out

Tylah @ Waikowhai Primary School : Welcome

Tylah @ Waikowhai Primary School : Welcome: Welcome to my learning journey.Welcome to Tylahsblog I am posting a thinglink so hope you like it

Welcome

Welcome to my learning journey.